1) Read "The Coolhunt" by Malcolm Gladwell. In your journal, respond: Do the details of the coolhunt make you think that the media culture is too pervasive an influence in young people's live? Or is it appropriate? 
2) Read the Henrik Hertzberg Talk of the Town piece from the New Yorker about the State of the Union address. Post your response as a comment on this message -- what elements of argumentation do you see in his short essay? 
3) Send me an electronic copy of your freshman profile. 

 


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Dan Hurwit
02/07/2010 09:04

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In his piece in the New Yorker, Hendrik Hertzberg argues that Obama and the democrats should not give up on passing healthcare legislation because they still have an 18 vote majority in the senate. To make his point Hertzberg uses several elements of argumentation. First, he makes the claim that the democrats are backing away from the republicans even though they still have a huge majority. He grounds this claim by showing that Obama has been backing down to the republicans. For example, he cites the fact that Obama has proposed a spending freeze which is in accordance with republican views. He then provides strength to his argument by stating that in the state of the union address, Obama acted like more of a leader. Hertzberg then qualifies his statements by citing Obama's trip to the republican retreat in Baltimore. Obama used diplomacy to quell support among the republicans for healthcare and to try to reach a compromise. Hertzberg sticks to the Toulmin model of argumentation to make his point.

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Max Ebb
02/07/2010 09:24

In this piece, Hendrik Hertzberg argues that the Democrats must push forward with the health care bill and try to get it passed instead of just sitting around and moping about the loss in Massachusetts. To support his argument Hertzberg uses various techniques. First he claims that the Democrats are allowing the loss of Massachusetts to block them from using there record majority to pass the health care. Hertzberg suuports this claim through his description of Obama's State of the Union address in which Obama urges his fellow Democrats to not give up on health care but to instead work hard and hopefully persevere. Hertzberg then, to strengthen his argument, acknowledges the fact that Obama has also been a little shaken by the loss that Martha Coakley suffered at the hands of Scott Brown. By acknowledging the fact that Obama has wavered on health care Hertzberg is then able to say that the loss of this senate seat should not deter the democrats but rather they should look on the bright side and use there majority to their favor. Health care is not a lost cause. Hertzbeg believes, as stated in the last paragraph, "If the President and the Democrats of Congress fail to enact health-care reform while they still have a real chance to do so, it’s hard to see how they will be able to do anything else."

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Deanna
02/07/2010 10:24

Hendrik Herzberg argues that Democrats should move forward with the health care bill despite their loss of the 60th chair. He asserts that the Democrats have been using their loss as an excuse for not pushing the health care bill, which he supports by saying that Obama was also affected by the loss. Obama, though, recovered his ground by the time he gave the State of the Union, and even took a moment to tell the Democrats not to give up. The Democrats simply need to use other techniques, since they can't automatically pass any bill. Ultimately, Herzberg leaves the reader with the idea that the Democrats must keep pushing, otherwise they will have a difficult time achieving anything over the next few years.

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Mr. Baron
02/07/2010 11:02

Here's an interesting question about this piece: Who do you think his audience is? The audience of the New Yorker is presumably more liberal than the population as a whole, and might be expected to therefore endorse most of what he says already. Who is he trying to convince?

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Rj Mak
02/07/2010 13:51

I think Henrik may be addressing the senate, particularly the republicans- just my stab at it. Henrik is trying to focus on the positive, stating that the Democrats still have a majority, just not an applicable one. He basically describes the gridlock we’re in and tells us how Obama’s trying to fix it. Henrik tells us we need to find other ways to make the health bill pass and that we should not give up hope yet. The quote from Obama’s speech describes Obama’s feelings, stating he feels, ‘we are so close, let’s get it done.’
A side note, Obama may have been trying to get some of the Republicans on his side using the common “redneck” saying “Git’r dun’ in his speech but in a more mannered way.

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Liam O'Flaherty
02/07/2010 13:54

In his talk of the town piece, Hendik Herzberg urges Democrats to forget Scott Brown's devastating victory in Massachusetts, and focus their attention onto the bigger picture of health care reform. Herzberg claims that Democrats are using the loss of the 60th chair as an excuse to stop trying to get the heath care bill passed. Obama made the same statement in his state of the union adress, and Herzberg uses this through quotation and paraphrasing in order to support his claim. For the duration of the piece Herzberg basicly reiterated Obama's main thesis in his state of the union address, which is not to give up on healthcare. By showing President Obama's journey from being utterly "discombobulated" at the news of Brown's win, to him strongly taking a stand for the healthcare bill he believes in, Herzberg uses President Obama as a role model for all democrats. As for audience, i believe Herzberg is mostly writing this piece in order to reiterate President Obama's point in his state of the union, but also to add his own tone of urgent encouragement to continue fighting for heath care reform. I think he is trying to convince democrats to not quit on a bill that would change America.

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Hallie
02/07/2010 15:20

Henrik says that the Democrats should still pursue their healthcare bill and try to get it passed, because soon they might not be able to do anything else. This, though, could be their gateway to change, as Obama promised. He urges Democrats to not have a defeatist attitude with the election of Scott Brown and their loss of the 60 votes needed. The Democrats need to keep in mind though that they still have a high majority and can still make a huge impact, as promised. Henrik's audience could be the Democrats of the U.S. He could be urging them not to lose faith just yet. Obama is still trying and so are the rest of the Democrats in the Senate and the House. In my opinion, people are getting frustrated that things are happening slowly, and the Democrats cannot give up. They made a promise, and who says they won't fulfill it? I think Henrik wants the liberals to give Obama and his administration more time to complete their goals and fulfill their promises.

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Ariel Rivkin
02/07/2010 17:16

The audience of "Sparrin’ Words" by Hendrik Hertzberg are the Democrats currently in Congress. Hendrick Hertzberg is trying to convey to them that instead of shying away from the "health care challenge," they should stand up and "change" what they feel is wrong.

In Hendrik Hertzberg's "Sparrin' Words," Hertzberg argues that the Democrats should be resilient to the current challenge regarding the Health Care Bill just as President Obama is advising them. Hendrik does this by using President Obama as an example of a brave and confident leader. As Hendrik Hertzberg writes, "He looked and sounded like a trillion bucks...He appeared to be in an unusually relaxed,...mood. He exuded confidence." He also includes how Obama is pushing the Democrats to stand up and "fight" as best they can. As Hendrik includes from Obama's speech, "Lets get it done. Let's get it done." From Hendriks illustration of President Obama, Hendrik shows Obama's urgency to 'fix' the current situation regarding Health Care. He contrasts this urgent, confident and brave persona with the Democrats. As Hendrik writes, "If...the Democrats of Congress fail to enact health-care reform while they still have a real chance to do so, it’s hard to see how they will be able to do anything else." By contrasting these two personas and attitudes, Hendrik argues that the Democrats should be stop acting so defeated.

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Tanny K
02/07/2010 17:50

Hendrik Hertzberg argues that Democrats in Congress need to "keep their heads up" and realize that they have one of the largest majorities in Congress in years. These Democrats, he claims still have the power to make a significant change, in areas such as the Health Bill, and the loss of a single vote to the Republicans shouldn't hinder their progress. Hertzberg shows the contrast between the pre-SOU President Obama and the post-SOU President in order to illustrate the change in confidence and motivation that the Democrats should follow in taking the right steps into the future. "Don’t walk away from reform. Not now. Not when we are so close. Let us find a way to come together and finish the job for the American people. Let’s get it done. Let’s get it done." Obama's speech summarizes the attitude that Democrats should have in the coming months, according to Hertzberg.

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Allen L
02/07/2010 18:55

In "Sparrin' Words," Hertzberg argues that President Obama and the Democrats should push forward with health care reform with either of two options that are available to them. He insists that they should not be stymied by the "Republican No." Hertzberg began by not fully supporting Obama's actions - in fact, he criticizes him for his lack of determination and feeble reaction to the election of Scott Brown to the Senate. This is in recognition of his audience (Pathos.) In order to appeal to a wider constituency, he recognized Obama's flaws. Still, as is clear at the end of the article, he fully supports what President Obama is trying to do (Ethos.) Hertzberg supports his argument by saying that if Obama is unable to accomplish health care, "it’s hard to see how they will be able to do anything else." This in itself is a slippery slope, though it's an emotional argument that works to convince the reader that this is a task that Obama cannot pass up.

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Kate
02/07/2010 19:57

In this article, the author says that the democrats must continue to try and pass the healthcare bill, despite Scott Brown's victory. He uses Obama as an example to demonstrate what he thinks all democrats must do: move on, like Obama did, and keep fighting. By showing how Obama went from "discombobulated" to confident as he delivered his speech, he shows the followers of Obama that they must follow in his footsteps and do the same. This makes sense, as I think this article is aimed at the democrats. These are the people who need to continue working for healthcare and who would be interested in following Obama. He also supports this by saying that the democrats still have a huge minority and still have a lot of power- this is logos.

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Amrita Rao
02/07/2010 21:01

The purpose of Henrik Hertzberg's piece is to convince those conservative democrats, liberal republicans, and self-described independents that are on the fence about health care to move forward with reform.
He begins his piece with the obvious cause for concern: the election of Scott Brown to the senate. Brown's seat was once held by Ted Kennedy, a senior advocate for health care reform. Hertzberg displays the false dilemmas that the media began to spew, "Scott Brown wins Mass. race, giving GOP 41-59 Majority." As we learn later in the piece, Democrats still enjoy a comfortable majority in both houses.
The next paragraph goes on the describe the President's reaction to the change. This paragraph, taking minor stabs at Obama's fragility and the half-baked proposal, serves to give Hertzberg's later arguments more legitimacy. It is as if he is arguing the opposite side to show that he has taken all factors into consideration.
The short paragraph that begins "Don't walk away..." serves to summarize the main purpose of the piece, as Hertzberg urges bipartisan reconciliation and legislative action. He goes on to list steps to an eventual solution.

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Tessa
02/07/2010 21:21

I just posted and it all deleted and I'm tired so this will be short...

Hertzberg's argument in this piece is that, to put it bluntly, Obama needs to get his act together and get the health care bill passed. To make his argument, Hertzberg makes many broad claims. He often uses qualifiers to scale down claims, such as, "just about everyone outside the Republican congressional caucus recognizes that, with unemployment at ten per cent, the near-term need is for more public spending—more stimulus, not less."
Hertzberg also uses backing to support his claims. When he states, "reconciliation is arcane but effective," he backs it up using evidence - "the Republicans used it to enact tax cuts for the comfortable." This particular piece of evidence also serves as an analogy, comparing two key pieces of legislation for presidents.


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Jolie
02/07/2010 22:18

In this piece, Hertzberg argues that Democrats should not be devastated by the election of Scott Brown but should look ahead and keep working for the future. He uses mostly inductive reasoning to support his claim. The evidences that he uses include: Democrats still have a great, rare majority in Congress; Democrat President Obama is ready to lead and keep working; Democrat will not be able to do much else if they do not use the advantage now (now or never)...
This piece is written for liberals, and more specifically, Democrats. The piece assumes that the audience agrees that Scott Brown's election will interfere with the administration in a negative way for the American people and more importantly, that passing the bill is necessary (while many Republicans will disagree with that). These assumptions make it clear that this piece's main focus is to urge Democrats to not give up on the bill and their future.

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SaschaB
02/07/2010 22:46

Hertzberg states his argument pretty bluntly in the final paragraph: if, with the largest majority in years, the Democrats fail to pass much-needed health-care reform, how will they do anything else? There are, of course, a few underlying assumptions (warrants?): (1) the health-care reform bill is adequate; (2) the bill is central to future Democratic legislation (and to Obama); and (3) America’s “increasingly dysfunctional governmental mechanisms and increasingly raucous political culture” is simply ridiculous, and threatening to real change. These might not actually be warrants (assumptions?), though, because Hertzberg addresses these ideas throughout the piece. He agrees with Obama’s challenge to Republicans to create a better approach to the health-care issue, notes that health-care has “consumed much of the Administration’s first year” and his second-to-last paragraph (as well as much of the piece) implies that the Republicans need to listen to Obama’s “passion for comity” (am I making an inference?).

It would seem logical that the intended audience of this piece is the various parties in Congress, but I don’t see those people actually changing their minds based on something in the New Yorker. I think Hertzberg has to be aware of that, too. I feel like it’s more for erudite, liberal scholarly types who enjoy reading and debating about politics. I’m not sure how much he intends to instill real change.

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Roxanne
02/08/2010 03:05

Hendrick Hertzberg argues that the Democrats must pass the healthcare bill. He claims that if the Democrats fail to pass this bill, they'll continue to fail on other issues, and will lose a great amount of power. It's quite clear that the author is a Democrat and in favor of health care reform (ethos). His central argument could appeal to the pathos because democrats don't want to see their party lose power. Personally, I think his claim is a bit extreme. No party has had such a large majority in many years and just because the Democrats are no longer fillibuster proof doesn't mean they will lose all power to change things. The health care bill will have some effect on this, but not as severe as Hertzberg describes.
He begins the article with a claim (though not the central argument) that Obama's State of the Union speech came after "the most harrowing nine days of his Young Adminstration." Hertzberg uses Scott Brown's election into Ted Kennedy's longtime democratic seat as evidence.

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Lucky
02/08/2010 04:05

Hendrick Hertzberg claims that Democrats need to push on and pass the healthcare bill, even though they have lost their 60 seat supermajority. He points out as evidence that the democrats should not let the special election in Massachusetts slow them down, because they still have huge majorities in both the house and senate. Hertzberg ultimately argues that if the Democrats cannot pass such an important piece of legislation with such a large majority, its unlikely that they will be able to do anything else. Another claim that Hertzberg uses to support his argument is the idea of deficit spending. Hertzberg is clearly an economic liberal (in the Keynesian sense, not Friedman sense) and assumes that his audience will agree with his claim. There are an incredible number of warrants behind this claim, that Friedman does not explicitly address because of the audience he is writing to.
Therefore, Hertzberg's article is probably aimed at liberal or moderate democrats--the scholarly audience of the New Yorker. Because contrary to what Hertzberg believes, that "just about everyone outside the Republican congressional caucus recognizes that, with unemployment at ten per cent, the near-term need is for more public spending—more stimulus, not less" many americans do not believe that, because economics is a difficult subject that many Americans either don't understand or don't bother to learn. It is usually the democrats (and not even the Blue Dogs) who believe in Keynesian economics, even though it worked during the Great Depression.
The point of Hertzberg's piece is to convince his audience that the democrats absolutely must pass healthcare reform. I think that Hertzberg's article may have an influence because the healthcare message has gotten so muddled that many Americans (including democrats and the "elite" audience of the New Yorker) are not even sure what is in the healthcare bill or whether it is worth the time and effort to pass it now amidst an economic crisis. It's not just the "Average American" from Indiana who is lost in this debate, but the liberals in the Northeast (such as Massachusetts)--and the target audience of the New Yorker--as well.

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David Han
02/08/2010 05:06

Hertzberg’s piece tells how, even though President Barack Obama’s State of the Union Address was to the president’s high rhetorical standards, that the state of health care reform, job creation, and thus the Democratic Party look glum. In the first paragraph, Hertzberg sets the tone of the piece, comparing how Republican Senator Scott Brown’s senatorial win shattered Congressional Democrats psychologically as Haitians were shattered physically after the earthquake.
The piece slowly adds more and more inductive reasoning as to why the Democratic Party should be worried: Brown’s election and thus the 60th vote in Congress, Obama’s freeze plan siding towards Republican views and thus decreasing public spending in lieu of the economic downturn, the unwillingness of Republicans to see Obama succeed, and the delayed health care bill. Hertzberg uses the warrants that unemployment is bad, the Democratic Party will not stray from Constitutional procedures to pass legislatures, public spending will stimulate the economy, and that Republicans care more about seeing the Democratic Party fall than to pass potentially useful bills.
Hertzberg also uses inductive reasoning to say that Obama’s State of the Union Address was very good. One piece of evidence was that Obama was confident. Another was the analogy of Obama’s conversational speech with FDR’s fireside chats, a highly remembered and innovative measure to connect with the American people. Hertzberg’s last evidence as to why Obama’s Union Address was good was because he also attempted to convince Republicans to work together.

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Jesse
02/08/2010 07:14

IN "Sparrin' Words," Hendrik Herzberg argues that the Democrats' healthcare plan will have significantly more difficulty being passed despite President Barack Obama's words of optimism.

Herzberg primarily uses logos in this piece, revolving his argument solely on logic instead of emotion. For example, he states that there are only two ways the Democrats can pass the bill, and he effectively lists out these two methods. Even before this, he acknowledges the difficulties the Democrats will face when trying to pass the health-care bill ("any new health-care bill that requires a standard floor vote in the Senate is out of the question").

Herzberg also uses a lot of inductive reasoning in this piece. He mentions specific examples (such as Browns victory in Massachusetts and specific things Obama said in his State of the Union Address) and makes broader statements. Inductive reasoning essentially allows Herzberg to connect these events to one another and weave an argument.

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Marsha
02/08/2010 07:35

Hertzberg’s article is written for liberal democrats who have given up after Brown’s victory. Through his claim he encourages the democrats to act and make noti0ns to pass their bills and healthcare form so some good can come to the country. He also points out that regardless of the loss in Mass. Elections the democrats still have huge majorities in both the house and senate. According to Hertzberg, if the democrats cannot pass the healthcare bill with the majority that they currently hold it will almost be impossible for them to pass any other bills and bring about any other reform. Personally I was moderately convinced but Hertzberg’s argument. He uses inductive reasoning and lists the downhill fall of the Democratic Party to emphasize the importance of passing the healthcare bill. Although his argument comes out as passionate, there are many warrants such as : assuming the bill is perfect and will actually benefit the country, thinking that all republicans want to see the democrats fail, thinking democratic party will loose its influence if health care is not passed and seeing unemployment as bad all make his arguments weaker. Overall, Hertzberg was very impressed with Obama’s Speech and emphasized it so the Republicans and the Democrats can realize that although their ways are different eventually they are trying to achieve the same thing.

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Drew
02/08/2010 07:52

It seems likes Hertzberg's purpose with this piece is convince Democrats that all is not lost. He does this by arguing that their leader, President Obama, is still effective and just as powerful. The main way he does this is by illustrating Obama at different points in recent political history. First, he describes Obama as "plainly discombobulated" and "feeble," after Scott Brown won the senate race in Massachusetts. Then, Hertzberg illustrates him during the State of the Union address saying, "He looked and sounded like a trillion bucks," and "he appeared to be unusually relaxed, even bouncy." The second description of the President is the one we are used to and see all the time. However, by providing the weaker illustration first, Hertzberg makes the stronger one seem much more powerful. In a way, he utilizes a "straw man" technique, cutting down the poor image of Obama and replacing it with strength.

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Hye-Jung
02/08/2010 08:01

In "Sparrin' Words," Hendrik Hertzberg argues that the Democrats should continue to move forward with the health care bill, rather than give up hope of its passage due to Scott Brown's election. He takes a liberal standpoint, siding with the Democrats and arguing that they should not be deterred by the Republicans (ethos). Hertzberg uses Obama's leadership as an example that the Democrats should be able to rise up against this setback - the contrast that he sets at the beginning between OBama's mood right after Brown's election and during his State of the Union address serves as a model for how the Democrats as a whole should react. He then closes with another mention of Obama's leadership, about how well he was able to interact with the Republicans. This is more substantial than the first, which is effective as it answers a potential question following his argument. The mentions of Obama's leadership effectively frames the essay and strengthens his argument in that it implies that if the president is capable of carrying out what Hertzberg is arguing, then the Democrats as a whole should be able to as well.
Hertzberg's inclusion of a quotation from Obama's State of the Union address also furthers his argument in that it not only refers to Obama's plan, but also concisely reflects his own argument.
In setting up his next argument, that the Democrats have enough of a majority to be successful with the health care bill, Hertzberg follows a traditional argument format. He begins with his claim, then dictates the problem, and then provides a solution (evidence that his claim is correct). He then provides a warrant, that "reconciliation is arcane but effective," and provides this with a backing: "the Republicans used it to enact tax cuts for the comfortable, the heart of George W. Bush's domestic program as surely as health-care reform is the heart of Obama's.

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Emma
02/08/2010 08:17

In Sparrin' Words, Hertrzberg argues that the Democrats should continue to move forward with the health care bill. He explains that both the House of Representatives and the Senate have passed similar health care bills and now need only one more vote to merge the bills into one. He uses fact, that the democrats have 59 senators of of one hundred, to point out that this is still the largest majority wither party has had. Hertzberg uses the same facts that one arguing against him would, but points out why these points prove that it's still possible to pass health care.

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Greg
02/08/2010 09:05

Hertzberg shows how the Democrats loss of power as a result of Scott Brown's election to the senate has begun to affect the Democratic party's morale in contrast with President Obama's urgent, yet hopeful stand. He starts out the essay establishing his knowledgeable ethos, and appeals to emotion, specifically by using the analogy of congressional democrats to Haitians after the earthquake. The rest of his piece, though, uses mostly logos, using a lot of evidence to support his claims.

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Chris Erspamer
02/09/2010 09:23

While Hendrik Hertzberg's article on the State of the Union and the drive towards health care reform was mostly factual, it clearly held a bias in favor of Obama and his message. Interestingly, the author heavily relies on inductive reasoning, spending most of the piece giving evidence that the Democrats are in a strong position but still appear impotent and reaching the conclusion in the final paragraph that if Democrats do not pass health-care reform now they will probably be unable to get anything else done. The conclusion, in turn, is based on several claims throughout the piece: that Congressional Democrats are unwilling to go against a filibuster; that the health care bill is closer than ever before to being complete; that Congress could push the process through by using reconciliation. As for Hertzberg's audience, it is most likely the pessimistic liberals who have given up hope on passing health-care. After all, he is not arguing in favor of the merits of health-care (I imagine the assumption that "healt-care reform is necessary and beneficial" comprises a huge warrant in the piece). Rather, he is trying to convince readers that Obama's State of the Union Address does not have to be just words, that if the Democrats in Congress follow up on his lead, they may - and must - salvage the bill.

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